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Arandee, weechu tyethgeethin
Akeeata bont azar
Tyatatee,
X'iutha
Yeek, Tal zeekee a
uuta
Yun yim di
goot
Noot, Nub reh rehluu
Kee x'ekra weechu
Nude lurd jeejee
Weechu jeejee ys oodeef
Yun yum, chak
Kee, Nub eshtee
A daboolhat, lang ekla
Nime nee gyesh, y nu sheeu
Nub nuv weechu
Eee reh rehluuu, lungee drik
luka |
Listen, you stranger Hear great magic Come, is important Look, sun safe in sky It is very good Now, I would dance Wishes to guard you I am a silly face Your face is sweet I like it, yes Wishes, I would give To change, think big Take me please, and my name I would love you We dance, lost in happy stars |
Very crevah and inventive...
ReplyDeleteIt is very cute. Definately makes one smile :) When one writes from the heart it is evident, even in a silly light-hearted way. I envy the fact you can write from different perspectives...we should collaborate :)
ReplyDeleteI thought it was funny...I say this because of the cute almost invisible undertone and subtext. This was a brilliant display of true writing prowess....Much impressed.
DeleteI have been readong your blog for a while now, back in May actually. While I strongly believe you are a talented writer, I am forced to ask a question that has been burning on my mind.
ReplyDeleteLately, you seem very withdrawn emotionally from your writing. I look back to the "Angel" stories and they are raw and passion filled to where one can feel the emotions of both adn live in the moment....lately however you seem much more rehearsed and withdrawn. It deviates from your style.