Rainclouds
darken the sky
Thunder rumbles in anger
A heart struggles to fly
Facing imminent danger
What is this new emotion
That threatens normalcy
It feels like sipping a potion
That turns rituals into fallacy
The life of a hermit seems past
Old habits turning to dust
How is life changing this fast
This heart was covered in rust
Through the clouds of change
A ray of light breaks free
Spreading to fill a mighty range
It grants joy without a fee
Comforted by this truth
Doubts begin to fade
Joy causes feelings of youth
A sensation that your smile made
I am for lack of a better term stunned with the raw emotion and refinement of your writing. I say this because it's always a breath of fresh air and a soul awakening experience for me. I have been following your blog for a few months now and have not been let down. This poem raises the bar and shows such range and brilliance on your part. I am a bit of a blog junkie but follow very few as I do yours. Another one that caught my eye is also poignantly written. So much so I fist thought that it might be another of your blogs until I noticed the user name. You should check it out. http://daniellefaur.blogspot.com/. I very much look forward to your further posts. Again, Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you, both for your compliments and your following. I have seen you since I first started, and it is truly appreciated. I hope that I can continue to keep you entertained. Many thanks for the reference to someone else who draws upon words to craft their world as well.
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome. Let me know what you think of her writing. I am captivated and forced to acknowledge and think. Not to many writers get me so enthralled. She is definately an attentive and sweet writer. So again lemme know what you think of her.
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